interesting. Very vivid...i love the word choice. I had to laugh when you said even some things can ruin my appetite, i loved it. And when you capitalized Hunger. Idk if you did that on purpose but i assume you did. To me it makes me think that your hunger has thus become its own being and is then out of your control, i like it....I was reading this aloud to my friend the first time and it was like a suspenceful story lol We couldnt stop reading it. Bravo